You completed a paper for me and my teacher finallly graded it and gave Essay

You completed a paper for me and my teacher finallly graded it and gave a 40%, is it posible to edit the following errors… 
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 Page number should be on the right in conjunction with 3 words to describe your paper.
 
Case study:  on her family porch in Utah.
ply with children?
 
You need to proof read this and then have someone else proof read it for spelling and gramatical errors.
 
How was the DNA matched, where did the suspect DNA come from, was it in a data base or was he a suspect all along?
 
Same issues with the second case study.
 
How was the DNA matched, where did the suspect DNA come from, was it in a data base or was he a suspect all along?