Peer Editing

Please consider the following points as you read the rough draft; check off and write COMMENTS for EACH editing point below to improve the assignment (please read ALL). Thank you for your careful consideration of your classmate’s writing.
_____ Title: Is the title appropriate, telling/informative, or needs improvement? Why/How?
_____ Thesis statement: Is the thesis statement/purpose clear from the outset?
______Introduction: Does the introduction create interest? Sets the scene? How?______ Specific details to support position: Cite two to three specific details the writer uses to support their claims about the ethical issue. Is the evidence sufficient?
_____ Logical organization: Easy flow of ideas from one point to the next? Paragraphs arranged in a logical manor? Transitions from point to point?
_____ Who is the intended audience/target demographic? Suggest a publication/website/app, in/on which this would likely be published. Is the language/vocabulary suited for the intended audience?
_____ Are there any issues with spelling, punctuation, grammar?
_____ Conclusion: Does the writer summarize the main points of emphasis relating back to the thesis statement? Is there a clear call to action?
______ Are images/modes employed to enhance the piece? If not, please make suggestions.
______ Are the requirements met in terms of page limit and sources?
______What improvements can you suggest, especially to add to increase reader interes